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Beach
Jul 21, 2007 23:40:54 GMT -5
Post by mindomatt2 on Jul 21, 2007 23:40:54 GMT -5
The sand so soft, like the skin on your bones. The tiny cystals found in it, like the small things you do for me. The beautiful shells, like your amazing smile. The forceful waves, like the tough thoughts you put me through. The beating sun, like your warm heart.
Just stop and listen…. Only THIS can replace your voice. The waves crash, and birds squawk; But if you listen closely, for only a moment, Everything stops and an eerie silence sweeps across the sand It’s in that moment that you and all this comes to mind.
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Beach
Aug 1, 2007 13:57:05 GMT -5
Post by D'mitri on Aug 1, 2007 13:57:05 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Wow. I must say that i am surprised. This is Very good. I have no negative comments.[/glow]
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Beach
Aug 1, 2007 19:55:59 GMT -5
Post by mindomatt2 on Aug 1, 2007 19:55:59 GMT -5
that's funny u say that, cause this is the one i sent into a contest a little back, and they said it was a winning poem, and it was gunna be put into a book on it's own page and everything....and then i was too lazy to send off the paper to verify that it could go in the book. But i also think I won Bronze with it in this poet gathering in California!. I just didn't attend, and it's too much money to send the three expencive "trophies" i won. Thanks though
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